Thursday, July 9, 2015

Chapter Zero RE-EDITED AND RENAMED AND FINISHED!

Good evening from Upper Darby!

THIS!? Is what I am SO GRATEFUL TO HAVE GROWN UP WATCHING IN THE MID-80'S!
Star Blazers was and still is THE SHIT! I have the entire collection and the realism is what I always loved about it. PEOPLE ATE IT ON THAT JAPANIMATION-SHOW! That and Robotech! You could never get TOO COMFORTABLE with your favorite characters because THEY COULD EAT IT JUST LIKE IN A REAL WAR IN REAL LIFE! It honestly made me understand as a kid that life is something YOU BETTER VALUE. And War, no matter how cool that shit seems!? YOU BETTER UNDERSTAND THAT PEOPLE ARE HONESTLY BEING KILLED! So it HAS TO BE WORTH IT!
OKAY!? I just put THE FINISHED RE-EDITED AND RE-NAMED CHAPTER ZERO into the Convert Words to Pages program here;
Words to Pages!

So on my Word Doc it tells me that I've RE-EDITED and FLESHED OUT 26-pages, however? This is NOT how many pages this will be for the ebook, SO!? I go and highlight the entire first chapter and the word doc comes back and tells me it is a grand total of 14,155 pages. This converts into 35.5 pages for the ebook! I literally gain 10-pages, damn-near, 10-pages.

Now!?

I got no problem with that! I know how much I'm going to sell the ebook for and I'm comfortable with that.
$5 USD.
Yes. That is CORRECT.
$5 USD.
It's the same price I was going to sell it for on Amazon, however now that Amazon is ass-out and I'm not using them!? Then I GET ALL OF THE PROFITS. Unlike before when I was only going to get either 70% for as long as I "qualified for it". Or 30%. So the next thing I'm going to do once I'm done is simply start reading up ON TAX FORMS. Because I'll have to pay all of my taxes myself since nothing is being automatically deducted. This part is easy for me, because I've worked for myself when I was in high school and college and had to do taxes on my own. This is why I have said before that I'm actually RETURNING to WHO I WAS. Not the bullshit I've been doing for almost the last 20-years.

Now!? NEW TITLE FOR CHAP-0!!!!!
Chapter Zero
An Overview
and
the Underworld-Realm
The new title and the reason why I went back to Chapter Zero?
Is because I really needed to remember MY WRITING STYLE. My job isn't to hide shit from the reader and then spring it on them when the characters themselves that the reader is reading about, actually know what the big plot-twist-secret is in the first place. I realized that Chap-0 was looking stereotypical for bullshit being written today. The author INTENTIONALLY introduces characters where THE CHARACTERS ACTUALLY KNOW THE INFO THAT THE AUTHOR IS TRYING TO SAVE UP TO SPRING ON THE READER LATTER ON, LIKE THIS SHIT HERE;
Darth Vader revealing that he's Luke Skywalker's father is one of the biggest cinematic plot-twist-revelations in movie history! HOWEVER!? If this were a book or in its book form? When Vader is told by the Emperor that he's his own son? When he says the Son of Skywalker must not become a Jedi. Then IN THE BOOK, THE READING-AUDIENCE SHOULD BE CLUED IN IMMEDIATELY BY VADER'S THOUGHTS AND ACTIONS, AS WELL AS THE EMPEROR'S THOUGHTS ON THE MATTER, THAT VADER.
Is Luke's father.

For me? To me? Hiding THAT from a BOOK READING AUDIENCE by PRETENDING LIKE HE WOULDN'T GIVE THAT SECRET AWAY IMMEDIATELY IN HIS THOUGHTS AND ACTIONS? That's CHEAP AND LAME TO ME. To INTENTIONALLY HIDE SHIT FROM THE READING AUDIENCE TO PLAY IT AS A CHEAP PLOT-TWIST OR WHATEVER, later on in the book or the book series. When the characters LITERALLY should have OUTED THE WHOLE THING IN THEIR ACTIONS AND REACTIONS.

So I decided to INTRODUCE the Central Character that MAKES THE ENTIRE WORLD WITHIN WORLDS BOOK SERIES HAPPEN. And I gave critical elements for this BACKGROUND DRIVING FORCE CHARACTER, so that the reader sees that;
Okay!?
So this muthafucka is roaming around going from different worlds and dimensions looking in on the MAIN CHARACTERS OF THAT PARTICULAR BOOK SERIES FOR WHATEVER IT IS THAT HE HAS IN STORE FOR THEM ALL UP THE LINE.
To me!?
That was important to do!
So I corrected that missing element from when I was pressed-n-stressed with the whole get it done so I can make the Amazon-deadline.

This first chapter, Zero Chapter. Also gives foreshadowing of the other characters in THEIR BOOK SERIES to come. So that's it!? I've been up since 5am. I'm tired. I'm gonna get some sleep and then get up and hit it again!
GOODNIGHT PEOPLES!
LATER!


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